Written in Ms. Johnson’s 6th grade English Class. so, 12 years old here.
DESPAIR
(A tale about a dog that wouldn’t stay buried)
A demon lived in my house, he slept under my bed.
He was healthy but I wished he was dead.
He was a dog, or so they thought.
“He is cute” said the man, from whom he was bought.
That was the biggest mistake I ever made,
I killed him, I thought his spirit would fade.
I buried him in my backyard at night,
I buried him low and out my sight.
He was a devil, I know now; but it’s way too late.
You see that dog didn’t like his final fate.
He came back to haunt me, to entice my fears.
This wasn’t it, No!; He haunted me for years.
One day I thought, “This is the last straw!”
I dug up his body but there was one flaw.
His body was absent, not in it’s own grave.
My heart stopped beating, now I’m his slave.
I hear his barking every night at nine.
This was it! I put up a for sale sign.
I quickly moved away from that house.
As a goodbye present I gave him a dead mouse.
But that didn’t stop his haunting, Oh no.
He wanted to kill me nice and slow.
One day I said, “I’m ending it all!”
I choked myself with a big metal ball.
Finally that dog is out my hair,
That dog, who I named Despair.
Cmon… 12 year old me kind of rocks, no?




#1 by Mike Mercer on August 17, 2010 - 4:41 pm
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U kidding?? 12??
Now I’ll NEVER share any of the poetry I was writing when I was 12.
Ya bastid.
This does rock, gonna read this to the wifey tonight.
#2 by Louie on August 17, 2010 - 7:23 pm
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The fact that you knew how to use semicolons at age 12 astounds me.